Introducing Lee.

As I walked around and took back in the feel of being home, I smelt something, something dead and I knew exactly what it was.

“Missed me?” Lee said as his pale skin reflected the light that came through the window. I shook my head “Why don’t you burn in here?” I asked and he hissed at me. “We are one in the same Emma,” he smirked and then walked up to me.

“Your mother lives next-door you know, she still gravies for you,” I snapped at him.

“Oh, shall I just walk in, mummy I am home, fangs and all,” He laughed as his skin started to burn.

“Move away from the window Lee,” I said before shutting the curtains. He laughed “You used to love me, do you not love my vampireness?” he asked with a grin, it wasn’t the same as Henry’s sweet, cheeky grin, it was an annoying, childish grin that was worn by a pale, irritating gentlemen. “No, I love that fact that you’re not actually dead,” I said with a sarcastic tone “I grieved for you Lee, I watched everyone grieve for you and then you turn up as a vampire,”

“Emma, you were the only one who would believe me, you’re a shape shifter and I could trust you to keep it secret,” he said seriously.

“You should have never known I was a shape shifter Lee,” I said to him as I entered the small kitchen. He looked at me through the serving hatch and said “But you showed me,”

“Not on purpose,” I muttered.

“I thought you were going to eat me,” He replied with a giggle.

“I should have eaten you,” I said with a smile.

Lee wasn’t all that bad, he had been a vampire now for around 3 years and he wore to like a badge, especially around me. “Lee, what were you doing in the dales that night?” I asked him.

“My mum had spouted off about how dangerous war zones are and how I should quit my job and settle down,” He answer. Lee was a dedicated solider, he still was if you counted the fact that he only drank the blood of the people who dissevered it and he had never changed anyone.

“I think she would prefer me to be a solider now,” he laughed and I looked at him “What happened to you?” I asked him just before I sat down with a bowl of cereal. He smiled and said “We had to go to Romania, they were having problems with a group of rebels that were taking over a few villages and claiming the people, they were vampires,”

“Did you bump into any, you know Shape Shifters ” I asked him. He smiled and said “You don’t mean Shape Shifters do you?” I shook my head. “It has been thought in Romania that the werewolf’s have been gone for thousands of years but I did happen to meet a shifter in my resent travels back to that hell hole,” he said, I shook my head “I though all Shifters were in some kind of army team,” I told him.

“So did I, after everything you told me but it turns out that he didn’t get the letter, I told him about you and he didn’t seem to approve,” Lee explained.

“Was he a wolf?” I asked and Lee nodded. He then pulled something out of his bag. He smiled and said “He wasn’t you to have this, he also told you to be careful of your superiors,”

“Why is that?” I asked but before he answered my phone rang. I picked up “Hello,” I said and Henry replied “You haven’t called,”

“Sorry Henry, I got held up,” I sighed. I heard Henry sigh down the phone and then Lee piped up “Is that lover boy?”

“No it’s Henry,” I hissed at him.

“Who is that Emma?” Henry asked.

“It’s OK Henry, it only Lee,” I replied not realizing what I had said.

“Is that your dead friend?” Henry puzzled.

“I might be pale now but there is no need to call me dead Emma,” Lee joked.

“Lee shut up,” I growled.

“Is he a, you know what I mean,” Henry said.

“Yes,” I murmured.

“Oh shit,” Lee said behind me “I don’t want this place crawling with Shifters,”

“This is my house Lee,” I shouted totally forgetting Henry was on the phone. “I am catching the next fight Em,” Henry said in a stern voice and then put the phone down.

“Oh no,” Lee said “What does he shift into?”

“A Honey Badger,” I said as I walked back into the kitchen to place my bowl in the sink.

“Like a big honey badger?” He asked “Because I have only seen Black Panthers in a Zoo and man, they have nothing on the size of you,”

“Yes, a giant honey badger,” I answered.

“Holly shit,” Lee laughed as he shuffled around in his chair “What would happen if you and your shape shifting lover made babies?” Lee questioned.

“Hang on, how do you know about Jake?” I snapped. I hadn’t mentioned Jake once since I got back home.

“Some vampires have super powers, like some Shifters do and mine happens to be, being able to rummage through people’s minds,” he murmured.

“Stay out of my head Lee,” I snapped.

“You like him, that’s cool, a bit like you liked me, oh wait till I tell them you lost your virginity to a vampire, is that even legal? Isn’t it like Necrophilia” Lee laughed.

“You are going to have to leave,” I said to him as I walked up the stairs. “I have nowhere to go Em, you know that,” He said.

“Well, then stay out of my head and out of my business,” I growled before going to get a shower.

16 thoughts on “Introducing Lee.

      • It totally didn’t need to happen. Being English I know that we are trusting people, that poor nurse was just trying to do her job. Awful really and the Radio DJ’s should feel very ashamed!!

      • Do you live in England? Thank you doubly for reading my post then. Feel free to reblog mine to your followers. I am just so sad about the whole thing. We are just getting wind of it here in America. Alesia

      • Lee,
        I am sure. I am not sure exactly when the news got out here, but I just saw breaking news on it about 2 hours ago. No one on my facebook seemed aware as I saw no posts there yet. This will be getting alot of attention I am afraid in the media due to its link with high profile personnel. I think as a nurse myself, I can tell you I can remember after 30 plus years of nursing that this kind of thing happening where there is a leak of information can happen and it does. Thank you for stopping by! Alesia

  1. Megan, though my feedback has been sparse at best, I’ve read your earlier work. I can say your writing is improved dramatically based on some samples from your other work. Your dialogue is good, and you use the characters to paint the “physics” of the vampire world they occupy – excellent! Your ability to treat the subject in the conversational context makes it more complelling.

    Don’t stop. You’re doing quite well!

  2. Okay, so you know I loooooove Lee. I don’t know if you plan on making this book into a series, but if you do please consider bringing Lee back in for at least one of them. He’s a smart arse, and I love that in a character!

    This was very good, Megan. You are getting much better in your narrative and you add exposition just when and where it’s needed. I really enjoyed your opening sentence, but my one suggestion would be to break it into two. I think if you add a period just before the word “and” and then make “I knew exactly what it was” it’s own sentence it’ll pack more punch.

    All in all, brilliant.

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